关键词： 修改 Favourite 小学五年级
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My Favourite Friend
Zhao Yipeng is my favourite friend. She often plays with me . She has got lots of good hobbies.
Her best hobby is reading . She likes reading very much. So am I. Whenever you see her, she （always） carries a book with her.（She always takes a book everywhere when you see her.） When she washes her feet every night, she always loves taking a book and reading it. She reads lots of books in the past years.
Writing is also one of her hobbies.（Her second hobby is writi-ng ）.She often writes stories on the computer. She has a blog in the Xiao Xun Tong website. （So am I. Her posts are very g-ood. ）And lots of people visit her blog everyday.
She likes sports very much. She is good at playing table tennis.
She is good at dancing .In the past three years, she often dances for us（she often bring dancing to us）. I think （the） da-ncing is her best hobby）. because it can bring happiness （h-appy） to us!
She likes cleaning her room and helping her mother do housew-ork. Sometimes she cleans room by herself.
She wants to swim. but she can’t swim. She never swims in the sea. I don’t think she can swim very well. because she is so thi-n.
This is my favourite friend. I like her very much.dou you likeh-er？
翻译：我最喜欢的朋友
赵艺鹏是我最喜欢的朋友,我们经常在一起玩，她有很多爱好。
她最好的爱好是读书。她非常喜欢阅读，我也是。无论何时你看见她，她总是带着一本书。当她每天晚上洗脚的时候，她总是拿一本书读，在以前她就读过许多书。
写作也是她的爱好之一。她常常在电脑上写文章。她在校讯通网站上有一个博客，每天都有有许多人访问她的博客。
她很喜欢运动,她很擅长于打乒乓球。
她在舞蹈方面也很擅长。在过去三年里，她经常为我们带来舞蹈。我想跳舞是她最好的爱好了，因为它能为我们带来欢乐。
她喜欢打扫房间和帮助妈妈做家务，有时候她自己打扫房间。
她很想游泳，但是她不会游泳，她从来没有在大海里游过泳。我不认为她能在游泳方面很出色，因为她是那么瘦。
这就是我最喜欢的好朋友赵艺鹏，我很喜欢她。
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