关键词： 修改稿 Week 小学一年级
本文适合： 小学一年级
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本日记是关于小学一年级的日记，题目为：《 My Next Week’s Plan(修改稿）》，欢迎大家踊跃投稿。
My Next Week’s Plan(我的下周计划)
Dear Yang bin :
How are you? I miss you so much. Now we have a summer holiday. Do you have plans for next week? Now I introduce my plan for next week (next week’s plans for you. )
In the next week, I want to go swimming. because I like water very much, and the weather is very hot. but my mother say ：“You mustn’t go swimming in the swimming pool ! because you are sick.”So I can’t swim next week(I’m not going swim in this week).
but I want to go skating in the Heyang Square every evening(too). Now I can skate very well. because I like skating too! Skating is a interesting sport. We can skate on the street. We are(will be)very tired, but we are(will be) very happy!
And I want to visit my grandfather (in the) next week. because my grandfather lives in the(a) hospital now. I miss my grandfather very much. I want to visit him, and I hope that my grandfather could come back from hospital soon.
These are my plans for(in the) next week. What about yours(And you)?
Love from,
Wei Mengdi
翻译：我的下周计划
亲爱的杨彬：
你好吗？我非常想念你。暑假到来了，在下周你有什么好的计划吗？现在，就让我来向你介绍一下我下周的计划吧！
在下一周。我准备去游泳，因为，我非常喜欢水，再加上天气非常炎热，我真想现在就跳进游泳池里凉快凉快。但我妈妈却说:“你不能在游泳池里游泳，因为你还在生病！”所以我本周的游泳就泡汤了。
我也想每天晚上去河阳广场滑冰。我现在能滑得很好，因为我太喜欢滑冰了!滑冰是一项非常有趣的运动。我们可以在大街上滑冰。虽然我们会很累,但是我们非常高兴!
在接下来的一周，我将去看望我的爷爷。因为我的爷爷生病了，现在还住在医院里。我非常想念我的祖父，所以，我想看望他。我希望我的爷爷快点儿从医院里回来。
这些就是我在接下来的一周的计划。你的计划是什么呢？
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隗梦迪
自评：这是我们倪老师英语班的作文，我给内蒙古的笔友杨彬写了一封信，告诉她我下周的计划，这是经过校讯通编辑孙老师指导后的修改稿，红色字体是修改后添加的，括号里的蓝色字体是需要删除的部分，还请大家多多拍砖，O(∩_∩)O谢谢！