关键词： Summer Vacation 小学六年级
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Summer Vacation（二）
In the morning , I did my homework and do some reading all the time. At() about 11:30, my friend, Ted invited me to eat food. I was very happy.
We ate lunch for Yong He Food Store. There was lots of delicious food there .I like it very much. My parents and I often go there to eat food.
After lunch, we planned to play basketball .And I invited my best friend, Tom to play basketball. And we played basketball for an hour. We were very tired . Then I came back to my home . because I was too tired and hot, I had a washing and had lessons.
Then I went the Calligraphy class . We had a new student . We were all excited. I was friendly to the new student. We made friends.
Today I had a good time. I studied, did some reading, played basketball, improved my handwring and played with my friends. How happy !
译文：
中午，我一直在写作业和读书。大约11:30的时候，我的朋友泰德邀请我去吃饭。我非常的高兴。
我们在永和豆浆吃的饭。那里有许多美味食物。我和我的父母经常去那里吃饭。
午饭以后，我们打算去打篮球。我邀请我最好的朋友汤姆去打篮球。我们打了一个小时的篮球。我们非常累。然后我回到了家。因为我非常的累和热，我要洗澡，然后上课。
然后我去了书法班。那有来了一个新学生。我们都非常兴奋，我对他非常的友好。我们成为了朋友。
今天我过得非常开心。我学习，我阅读，我打篮球，我练字，我和朋友玩，真的是好开心！
妈妈（爱在行动）点评：
1.儿子上完书法班回到家，很自觉地完成了英语日记记录每天的充实生活。只不过出了点小插曲。我在厨房做饭，突然儿子大喊：“不好，妈妈，我全写完了，但是忘记保存了，不知怎么就不见了。”这下，我这急性子脾气，就有点生气，但是儿子却反过来安慰我：“没事，妈妈，不就是再打一遍吗，这样还好呢，又多练习了一遍。”儿子心态如此好，真的好！
2.能用英语简单描述一天的学习生活，很好。英语中的日记，一般使用一般过去时，儿子注意了这点好，尤其是那些不规则动词的过去式，使用的很棒。还有一些词语用法，比如：invite sb to do sth, be friendly to sb 等，使用恰当正确。并且在段与段之间，灵活使用了连接词语。
3.只要坚持就好！
