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作文标题： Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Ne
关 键 词： 高中高三 1200字
字 数： 1200字作文
本文适合： 高中高三
下面是从各班中选出的英语期末考试（22分以上），为了保持原汁原味，只附上老师点评，未作任何修改。大家可从中领略不同风格和表达方式，有利相互取长补短，提高英语书面表达能力。
题目：Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
舒瑶（12班）
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that it is necessary First , they can learn better with the help of the teachers than by themselves Second , they can strengthen what they learn in class Third , they can get more useful things in those classes
However , other people insist that it is not necessary For one thing, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same knowledge in training classes For another thing, most senior students haven’t enough time to rest What’s worse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money
In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary We can study well at school if we work hard
文章条理清晰，内容完整，语意连贯，语病少，且表达灵活（见划线部分）。
陈颖
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that a training class or family teacher is quite necessary Following a teacher is always better than self study For one thing, it can strengthen the knowledge in class, for another, students can learn more
But some other people think it is unnecessary to have classes like this Firstly, students may easily get into the habit of depending on others Secondly, holiday is time for rest, students can’t keep studying without any rest And what’s more, most training classes and family teachers are in the purpose of making money Students can’t get good education in such classes
In my opinion, different students have different situation If a student is not good at self study, maybe a training class is fit for him But if a student think that he could trust himself, he will never need it
文章结构合理，层次清晰，简洁流畅，过度词使用得当；但少数句子和词不够得体或有误，如黑体部分。（点评：赵守斌老师）
雷洋
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that it’s necessary to go to training classes or have family teachers In their opinions, following the teachers’ instructions is more helpful than self study For one thing, students may strengthen what they have learned in class; for another, they can study much more from the teacher
However, other people think that it’s not necessary to do so, because depending on teachers is a bad habit Besides, students should have time to take a rest and quite a lot of teachers in training classes are not strict with the students They just care about the money that will go to their pocket本作文共6页,当前在第1页 1 2 3 4 5 6
关 键 词： 高中高三 1200字
字 数： 1200字作文
本文适合： 高中高三
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英语期末考试选下面是从各班中选出的英语期末考试（22分以上），为了保持原汁原味，只附上老师点评，未作任何修改。大家可从中领略不同风格和表达方式，有利相互取长补短，提高英语书面表达能力。
题目：Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
舒瑶（12班）
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that it is necessary First , they can learn better with the help of the teachers than by themselves Second , they can strengthen what they learn in class Third , they can get more useful things in those classes
However , other people insist that it is not necessary For one thing, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same knowledge in training classes For another thing, most senior students haven’t enough time to rest What’s worse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money
In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary We can study well at school if we work hard
文章条理清晰，内容完整，语意连贯，语病少，且表达灵活（见划线部分）。
陈颖
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that a training class or family teacher is quite necessary Following a teacher is always better than self study For one thing, it can strengthen the knowledge in class, for another, students can learn more
But some other people think it is unnecessary to have classes like this Firstly, students may easily get into the habit of depending on others Secondly, holiday is time for rest, students can’t keep studying without any rest And what’s more, most training classes and family teachers are in the purpose of making money Students can’t get good education in such classes
In my opinion, different students have different situation If a student is not good at self study, maybe a training class is fit for him But if a student think that he could trust himself, he will never need it
文章结构合理，层次清晰，简洁流畅，过度词使用得当；但少数句子和词不够得体或有误，如黑体部分。（点评：赵守斌老师）
雷洋
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints about it
Some people think that it’s necessary to go to training classes or have family teachers In their opinions, following the teachers’ instructions is more helpful than self study For one thing, students may strengthen what they have learned in class; for another, they can study much more from the teacher
However, other people think that it’s not necessary to do so, because depending on teachers is a bad habit Besides, students should have time to take a rest and quite a lot of teachers in training classes are not strict with the students They just care about the money that will go to their pocket本作文共6页,当前在第1页 1 2 3 4 5 6
